Thursday 8 March 2012

Projects 1º ESO










Ryan's personal comment:

1º ESO-España Directo

Jaime
- says “It was there also another earthquake”---should be “There was also another earthquake”
- says “These earthquakes affect principally..” ---should be “These earthquakes principally affect”

Daniel
- says “ the seismic of survation survey record a summary reaction of... “--- should be “The seismic survey recorded an earthquake of...”
- awkard pronunciation of richter scale (on the R)
- says “by the moment” --- should be “at the moment”
- says “ the 27th of september is record more or less 100 earthquakes” - should be “ On the 27th of september, there has been recorded more or lesss 100 earthquakes.”

Arturo and Mario
Didn’t see any mistakes (they did not speak as much as Daniel and Jaime)

Personal comment: I like how they said that Jaime’s connection got lost!!!